Nasir Bartley - WP1 Extra Credit Response

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1(Intro)	These three articles about the NFL and their players all contains certain conventions that will increase the rate of fan violence in the NFL. Even the unintended audience is also another population included in this slowly increasing rate of violence.
2	Colin Kaepernick’s Commercial escalated the issue of his bad relationship with the NFL The conventions of the article increase the fan violence in the NFL
3	Tom Brady’s situation brought a sinking feeling to his fans that look up to hm The conventions of the article brings an emotional appeal(pathos) towards fans of the NFL.
4	The new tackling rule brought many controversies to the table for the fans. Fans can lose interest in the game and cause violence amongst one another
5	Reasons why there is violence in the fan base. The perception fans have of the NFL and how the tackling rule is effecting it.
6	The NFL changed over the years.

For my WP1, I simply make an outline of how my paper should be. I put out what was the most important out of my paper and added the things that was less important to the outline. The first thing I added were my arguments of the paper. This is what my paper is gonna evolve around. The arguments I have can not only be the claim but it has to include textual evidence from a source that is related to the argument. The rebuttal is important because it shows that I know what the other side is thinking. Then I add the thesis and the conclusions to shape the paper up. Prioritizing all of the important and unimportant factors of my paper can help me finish the paper faster. This is because I spend more time on the important thing and get that out of the way in the shortest amount of time. Then I finish the unimportant thing fast because it doesn’t require me to think as hard. One thing I might change is my repetition of introducing my sources. I always say “According to the X” it makes the paper sound uninteresting saying that over and over.